looks great c: make the arms swing out wards when they move backwards and make the right leg (the leg on the right though from where their facing the left leg) move more underneith the character like the other leg does. plus some bounce would make this perfect too c: those are my crits
i did the walk cycle at work experience and they only had small graphics tablets (that sorta explains the thick lines, right?). sooner or later i'll add a character on top and we won't have to see the lines anymore
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i'd use smaller lines though
cheers for the crit mate, i'll remember your pointers when i next work on a walk-cycle
i did the walk cycle at work experience and they only had small graphics tablets (that sorta explains the thick lines, right?). sooner or later i'll add a character on top and we won't have to see the lines anymore
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